This was going to be my second page for the 'Drawn from history'. There would be a speach bubble to the side of him but going off to the side indicating that he can hear what they are saying. not that thats important but i was trying to give my comic a more illustration feel, but i think the readers would get confused and i hate how this page looks.

drawn from history

This was going to be page 6 of my first idea for 'Drawn from history' 

i really wasn't liking how my story was going but i worked very hard on this page and its not even complete. i just wasnt enjoying my original story so i scrapped this. It just wasnt working and i dont think the readers would find the story interesting.